LinkedIn Cold Messaging Hacks: Dos, Don’ts, and Examples That Actually Work in 2024

Let me guess: you'd rather clean your entire inbox manually than write a LinkedIn cold message. Because templates have failed you miserably.

You’ve followed every guide, and used every “surefire” template—and all you got was… nothing.

Or worse, a “F*** off!” 🫣

How do you break the ice?

How do you not sound needy?

And most importantly, how do you actually get them to respond?

Look, when a cold message is done right on LinkedIn, it can be a powerful way to get your foot in the door.

Because think about it.

LinkedIn is where most of your future clients hang. And getting their attention here is much easier than shooting them an email and risking spam.

I've spent years testing LinkedIn cold message templates. And I’ve put together everything I picked up along the way right here for you.

This blog unpacks

✅How to cold message on LinkedIn.

✅I’ll show you LinkedIn cold message templates that actually work.

✅You’ll learn the dos and don’ts to avoid rookie mistakes and how to

✅Bulk hyper-personalize and send cold messages on autopilot.

So stick around if you don’t want to waste hours writing messages no one replies to.

Ready?

Let’s begin with:

Does Cold Messaging on LinkedIn Work?

It sure does. And here’s why.

First, it’s personal and to the point. Unlike generic mass emails, a well-crafted cold message feels intentional.

Second, LinkedIn users are naturally open to new connections. That’s the platform’s whole vibe.

So, knowing how to write a cold message on LinkedIn is probably your best shot at being heard and standing out.

Which brings us to

How to Cold Message on LinkedIn?

Cold messaging happens on LinkedIn’s in-house messenger called - InMail.

Depending on your account type, you’ve got two options:

1. Basic LinkedIn account:

With the free plan, you can only message your connections. And if you wish to reach someone new, you’re going to have to send a connection request.

Interestingly, you can include a short message with your request.

So whether they accept your connection request or not, they’ll see the message you sent anyway.

2. LinkedIn Premium

A paid LinkedIn plan makes things a much easier.

With LinkedIn Premium, you can reach out to anyone, even if they’re not a 1st-degree connection.‍

This spells endless opportunities to connect with new people.

How to Cold Message on LinkedIn for Job Opportunities

Want to catch a recruiter’s eye and get hired quickly?

Drop them a cold message that

1. Mentions something specific from their profile or posts.
2. Says why you’re reaching out.
3. Highlights your relevant skills.
4. Closes with a clear ask - as in what would you like the recruiter to do next -  call you back, mail you, visit your website?

Here’s an example.

Edit and send or save it as a template for future communications.

Hey Mike,

I came across the Sales Leader role at XYZ Inc. that was posted last week on LinkedIn.

With 5 years of experience in sales, I’m really excited about the possibility of joining your team.

Could you let me know if the position is still available?

Thanks for your time,

Charles.

How to Cold Message a Hiring Manager on LinkedIn

Now messaging a hiring manager is a little different.

Since they’re the ones who make the final call, it's important to highlight why you are worth their attention.

In order to be noticed by them, you’ll need to

1. Do some research about the company and the position offered.

2. Show some genuine interest in their work.

3. Communicate openly and explain how you can step in to help.

4. Close with a clear call to action.

Example of a cold message to a hiring manager:

Hey Sam,

I admire the incredible work your team is doing in sustainability.

I’ve managed similar projects in the past, boosting efficiency by 40%.

Would love to hear more about your current challenges and share ideas.

Could we set up a quick virtual coffee?

Best,

Shawn.

How to Ask for a Referral Through a Cold Message

I know how hard it is to ask for a favor.

“What if they ignore me”, “what if I am disturbing them?”, “what if they flat out refuse”...

Our brains can come up with a million reasons not to do it.

But this is what I’ve learned over the years -

People are actually way kinder and more willing to help than we believe.

Then, of course, that doesn’t mean we ask for the moon!

Here's how to ask for a referral through a cold LinkedIn message:

1. Identify a shared connection or mutual interest.

2. Clearly explain why you’re reaching out to them specifically.

3. Simplify their effort by attaching your resume for easy forwarding.

4. Offer value or assistance in return.

5. Always express gratitude, regardless of their response.

Here’s an example of a cold LinkedIn message asking for a referral:

Hey Dan,

I noticed we both have experience with commercial real estate.

I’m applying for a position at your company (resume attached) and would greatly value your perspective.

Would you be open to a quick chat about your experience there? Happy to return the favor whenever needed.

Thanks so much,

Lucy

How to Cold Message on LinkedIn for an Internship

Thinking about sending a cold message on LinkedIn to bag your internship?

Smart move.

A well-written cold message could land you an internship no one knew existed—or one that wasn’t on the radar yet.

Here’s how to make it count:

1. Mention something specific about the company or person. Skip the generic, boring lines.

2. Highlight relevant skills. Keep it on-topic—no need to share unrelated talents unless they fit the role.

3. Clearly explain why you’re excited about this company or industry. No fluff, no jargon.

4. Be direct about what you’re asking for. Ambiguity won’t help.

5. Keep your message short and respectful.

6. End with a specific call to action that makes responding simple.

Here's an example to get you started:

Hey Alison,

I’m Dora Johnson, a Mechanical Engineering student at Stanford. I’ve been following your company’s work in sustainable energy and am truly impressed by your innovative solutions in renewable power storage.

As someone passionate about renewable energy, I’ve gained experience in project management and prototyping through a student-led solar initiative. I’m curious if there are any internship opportunities at Green Solutions.

Would you be open to a 10-minute chat about your experience at GreenTech and any advice for breaking into this field?

Looking forward to hearing from you,

Dora

Now that we've cracked how to get the messages going, let’s talk about the part you’ve been waiting for.

LinkedIn Cold Message Dos and Donts

Alright look, before we get knee-deep into it, let me tell you a couple of things like

❌Don’t be disrespectful, and

❌Don’t say anything controversial

Are pretty obvious.

You don’t need me to tell you all this right?

But if you have a hard time guessing if you’re crossing a line while cold messaging someone, ask yourself this:

“Would I get into trouble with the HR for saying what I’m about to say?”

If the answer to the question is yes, then don’t say it.

Simple.

Moving on:

Dos:

• Personalize it. Use their name. It's simple and obvious. But you’d be surprised by how many people skip this step.
• Acknowledge their recent activity. Did they share an article or comment on a post? Let them know you’ve paid attention.
• Find common ground. Maybe you went to the same school or support the same soccer team. Use it to start a conversation.
• Show genuine interest. Ask thoughtful questions about their work or company.
• Be clear about your goal. Whether it's a quick chat, advice, or a referral, be upfront and specific.

Don'ts:

• Don't be salesy. This is just a conversation starter. We’re not closing deals right away.
• Don't be vague. Saying "I love your company" is too generic. (And not to mention cringy). Be specific about what you admire.
• Don't make it all about you. Highlight how you can help them, not just how they can help you.
• Don't write a novel. Keep your message concise and to the point.
• Don't be careless. Proofread your message to avoid typos and errors.
• Don't send the same message to everyone. Tweak it according to the person you’re sending it to.
• Don't keep asking for things/favors. Don’t push for calls, or introductions if the other person isn’t interested. If they were ignoring you before, they’d block you now.

That being said

How Do You Send Hyper-personalized Cold LinkedIn Messages on Autopilot?

So, now you’ve got all the tools -

templates, strategies, and tips

To write LinkedIn messages that are read and responded to.

But do you have the bandwidth to sit and write hundreds of these, one by one?

Of course not.

And even if you somehow manage, LinkedIn’s got strict limits on how many DMs you can send.

That’s the reason why you need a LinkedIn + email automation tool like SalesRobot to

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💥Hyper-personalize all your messages like this one 👇

And guess what?

Since you’re not breaking any LinkedIn rules, your  LinkedIn account stays completely safe.

With SalesRobot you get to:

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💥If you do write your message, SalesRobot can tell you how likely you are to get a response and even give you smart tips to improve your message for better results.

If running a campaign is new to you, just:

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